The deathly stillness that silences voice
The cruel crimson haze that blinds
The frigid cold that envelops hearts
The lethal bullets that take young lives
When you can’t hear with stony ears
When you can’t see the scarlet streams
When you can’t feel your brother’s pain
When you can’t value innocent lives
Then stones become voices
Then anger becomes reason
Then death becomes protest
Then the angry gun dictates lives
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EXCELLENT! Marvellous! Superb! Brilliant!Awesome!
ReplyDeletethis is what emanates frm my mouth n heart wen i read ur lines, Sneha!
i have no words to thank u with!
i seek ur permission to share it with my frnds .
TAKE GOOD CARE OF YOURSELF!
Regards n Best wishes!
Suhail
thanks :)
ReplyDeletei knew u would appreciate this peice!
please feel free to share the message with everyone!
take care :)
awesome..simple yet amazing
ReplyDeletegood play wid words and truly depicts the pain and angst of kashmir
specially like the metaphorical last 4 lines
"Then stones become voices
Then anger becomes reason
Then death becomes protest
Then the angry gun dictates lives"
1st visit on ur site and must say impressive!
cheers,
angshu
@angshu thanks for ur comments :)
ReplyDeletesuch support and encouragement is duly appreciated!
well put..
ReplyDeleteHave you been to Kashmir?
Decently good, can be better :)
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ReplyDeleteSimple and sweet..
ReplyDeleteExplained beautifully..
Nice composition
@xyzandme: No i havent been to kashmir myself, but i've heard so much about it from my friends, hope to visit one day soon!
ReplyDelete@CLairvoyant: i hope so!
@Unknown wanderer and Alcina Thanks a lot for the lovely comments :)