Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Today I walked
With a dear friend
Wondering if he could be more than that
Today I walked
With a stack of books in my arms
Wishing someone would take it away
He didn’t offer to
And I didn’t insist
Today I walked
In a huff
Angered at his lack of chivalry
Today I walked
All the way home and thought
Would I have acquiesced if he had asked
Or would I have enjoyed denying him the chore
Proud to assert my independence
Today I reached home
Angered at his lack of tact
In denying me this pleasure of denial…
the right to choose…
to register dissent.

13 comments:

  1. I think Debomita hit the nail on the head,makes you smile :)
    Very Ruskin Bond-ish in it's simplicity I felt...

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  2. wow such high praise :)
    thanks Ameya!!

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  3. good one.. very nicely written ..-Ujjwal

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  4. Damn. Why so complex, everything that goes on in a woman's head?

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  5. Book nahi li to poem likh di?

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  6. @ujjwal: Thanks!

    @Karan: haha! socho agar le leta toh kya hota?!

    @Mango: I'd like to think men are complex too... where's the fun otherwise??

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